Live with integrity and truth and yours will be a dance of manifestation that deepens your ability to love. Awaken to an inspired life and yours will be a transcendent field of sacred blessings. Life is a musical prayer and we are its symphony. Let your song be love and your truth be joy. Let us all live in harmony on the earth as we embrace the rapture of being alive and create a feast of divine happiness.
Thank you of course for your in depth commentary. I just wish I could have found a better example of Suibokuga that didn't clash with the tone of the poem. I love the mountain scapes.
Or what jeny said right before you (and you've gOt to love her honesty) and I quote, "this poem reveals a disturbed mind". Lol. Tell me ssomething I don't know!