Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Keeping the Dream Alive with Helena "Phrase contest"  May 3, 2009 - May 13, 2009

Contest Completed


Blu Ribbon dreamer - THE NEED FOR LIGHT
Gold star dreamer - [writing deleted]
Bronze star dreamer - Come Dance
Honorable mention - THE HUNTERS GONE
Honorable mention - Lift Up the Veils



Write a poem in any form you like, including in the body of the poem
this phrase "Lift up the veils that darken the delicate moon".
(from "An Indian Love Song" by Sarojini Naidu)

If you omit the phrase then sorry your poem cannot be considered for an
award. ~ Helena

Have fun with this everyone!

An Indian Love Song by Sarojini Naidu


Lift up the veils that darken the delicate moon
of thy glory and grace,
Withhold not, O love, from the night
of my longing the joy of thy luminous face,
Give me a spear of the scented keora
guarding thy pinioned curls,
Or a silken thread from the fringes
that trouble the dream of thy glimmering pearls;
Faint grows my soul with thy tresses' perfume
and the song of thy anklets' caprice,
Revive me, I pray, with the magical nectar
that dwells in the flower of thy kiss.


How shall I yield to the voice of thy pleading,
how shall I grant thy prayer,
Or give thee a rose-red silken tassel,
a scented leaf from my hair?
Or fling in the flame of thy heart's desire the veils that cover my face,
Profane the law of my father's creed for a foe
of my father's race?
Thy kinsmen have broken our sacred altars and slaughtered our sacred kine,
The feud of old faiths and the blood of old battles sever thy people and mine.


What are the sins of my race, Beloved,
what are my people to thee?
And what are thy shrines, and kine and kindred,
what are thy gods to me?
Love recks not of feuds and bitter follies,
of stranger, comrade or kin,
Alike in his ear sound the temple bells
and the cry of the muezzin.
For Love shall cancel the ancient wrong
and conquer the ancient rage,
Redeem with his tears the memoried sorrow
that sullied a bygone age.

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First, second, third, Two Honorable Mentions & Albert Award




4 Contestants
5 Submissions
Created May 3, 2009