Subtle Sexuality. October 5, 2007 - October 20, 2007
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DetailsAlright I love the song by Finger Eleven, 'Paralzyer':
"I hold on so nervously To me and my drink I wish it was cooling me But so far has not been good Its been s****y And I feel awkward as I should This club has got to be The most pretentious thing Since I thought you and me Well I am imagining A dark lit place Or your place or my place Well Im not paralyzed But I seem to be struck by you I wanna make you move Because youre standing still If your body matches What your eyes can do Youll probably move right through Me on my way to you I hold out for one more drink Before I think Im looking too desperately But so far has not been fun I should just stay home If one thing really means one This club will hopefully Be closed in three weeks That would be cool with me Well Im still imagining A dark lit place Or your place or my place Well I'm not paralyzed But I seem to be struck by you I wanna make you move Because youre standing still If your body matches What your eyes can do Youll probably move right through Me on my way to you [repeat 2x] Youll probably move right through Me on my way to you [repeat]" It expresses strong emotion perfectly and it has such a subtle sexuality about it. I want to see how others writers express their sexuality without being in your face about it. I don't want erotic for this contest. It will be discarded immediately. That is exactly what we are trying not to do, so, please, not erotic. But have fun with this contest, I'm excited to see how it turns out. PrizesRibbon Icons...And pocket lint.
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Created Oct 5, 2007 |