Subtle Sexuality.  October 5, 2007 - October 20, 2007

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Alright I love the song by Finger Eleven, 'Paralzyer':

"I hold on so nervously
To me and my drink
I wish it was cooling me
But so far has not been good
Its been s****y
And I feel awkward as I should
This club has got to be
The most pretentious thing
Since I thought you and me
Well I am imagining
A dark lit place
Or your place or my place

Well Im not paralyzed
But I seem to be struck by you
I wanna make you move
Because youre standing still
If your body matches
What your eyes can do
Youll probably move right through
Me on my way to you

I hold out for one more drink
Before I think
Im looking too desperately
But so far has not been fun
I should just stay home
If one thing really means one
This club will hopefully
Be closed in three weeks
That would be cool with me
Well Im still imagining
A dark lit place
Or your place or my place

Well I'm not paralyzed
But I seem to be struck by you
I wanna make you move
Because youre standing still
If your body matches
What your eyes can do
Youll probably move right through
Me on my way to you
[repeat 2x]

Youll probably move right through
Me on my way to you
[repeat]"



It expresses strong emotion perfectly and it has such a subtle sexuality about it. I want to see how others writers express their sexuality without being in your face about it.
I don't want erotic for this contest. It will be discarded immediately. That is exactly what we are trying not to do, so, please, not erotic. But have fun with this contest, I'm excited to see how it turns out.

Prizes

Ribbon Icons...And pocket lint.

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Created Oct 5, 2007