A More Complicated Love Forum Need reviews? Want to review?

Hiya.

I'm hoping a few of you might be able to drop by and review my poem Infilttrated

I just finished it yesterday and I'm still running on a high from it but I know it can probably be improved upon. If I could just get some unbiased opinions?

Also I'd love to review some of your work in return or even if you can't review mine. Just shoot me a message or read request of what you'd like reviewed :) Sorry if this came out looking like spammage, I really do want to read you guys' works.

Thanks for your time,

Sparrow