Novels & Short Stories Forum New Story, Need Some Feedback

So like none of my stories, save a few, really get any feedback and it's hard to write new stuff if I keep making the same mistakes that nobody tells me about. So if you could go and check out some of my stuff (you don't need to read my novel; I know that's long) but my short stories are crying out in need of some reviews. I'd gladly return the favor! :D