Someone Who Can Write A Song


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Does anyone think they can write songs in the position of another Character? I'm writing a story about a young man who becomes a singer and rapper but I have realised I can't write songs myself. I managed to write one rap for my character, but I cannot write anymore. If anyone thinks they can here's a back story to the character.

His name is Jason Smith. He grew up in Hackey, North London. He has a dual nationality of England and Canada. Throughout his life, he was picked on by his brothers but his dad favors him. As he gets older, Jason doesn't behave as well in school as his parents would like in an attempt to be like his older brothers. On his 11th birthday, Jason gets in a fight at school and he is suspended. He returns home angry as he had been told if he misbehaved, he wasn't allowed his birthday party. So he takes his anger out on his mirror. He is then blamed for the death of his father that night as he is gunned down. His mother is very superstitious and cuts Jason from his left shoulder to his right hip with a shard of mirror. As he grows up, every year on his birthday someone in the family dies. On his 16th birthday, Jason's sister died on his 15th birthday due to him not giving her any drug so she steals them from him at a party and due to the effects of ecstasy she drinks too much water and b=floods her system. He is in and out of foster homes from 12 upwards, also jumping in and out of juvy. When he was 14, his girlfriend gives birth to his first child 3 nearly 4 months premature due to Jason lashing out at her and pushing her down the stairs.

This is the rap I wrote for him but can't seem to write anymore:

Why'd you do it?
I know it's my fault
Why, oh why do you do it mum?
It hurts so much,
The scars you leave
You cut me, you cut me and you let me bleed

She hit me
She kicked me
She threw me in my room
She never listened to my cries and screams
Oh mummy please just help me please!

I was just a boy,
I didn't believe
Oh why oh why was it up to me.
It was just a mirror,
Just a superstition,
It's not my fault that he had to leave

She hit me,
She kicked me,
She threw me in my room
She never listened to my cries and screams
Oh mummy please, just help me please!

Blame the man who took him from me,
Not the boy who you loved and adored,
How can you blame me it was just a mirror,
Just a stupid little mirror

I can feel the blood pouring from my wound,
I hear my door closing too
I scream, I cry to no avail
Oh mummy why'd you do this to me?!
I love you mummy, I love you so much
Help me mummy you're hurting me

She hit me,
She kicked me,
She threw me in my room
She never listened to my cries and screams
Oh mummy please just help me please!

And now
I wanna forgive her
I really, really just want to forgive her
But I can't
It hurts so much
Just looking at the scars you leave

She hit me
She kicked me
She threw me in my room
She never listened to my cries and screams
I love you mummy you're hurting me


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