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It's those sweet little moments.
It's those little moments that make my day
Those moments that can instantly turn my frown into a smile,
My bad days into good,
My feelings of emptiness into feelings of warmth and of glee that only a child feels.
It's those little moments that seem like they happen somewhat often
But the time in-between that can more often than sometimes feel like a lifetime.
It's those little moments,
that are born from a father whose name is True Love and a mother who goes by Je T'aime de Tout Mon Coeur.
Those little moments
That make me weak at the knees,
That make my hands tremble,
That change my day from odious to overjoyed, from revolting to radiant, from contemptible to carefree, and from execrable to exultant.
Those little moments
That make my heart fly out of my chest and That make me melt like an ice sculpture carved in the shape of loneliness and made from frozen bliss.
Those little moments,
That are created just simply whenever I see you,
Whenever I hear you speak,
See your awe-inspiring smile,
Look into your eyes,
Even if I just see your name written down on a piece of paper,
And every time I think of you.

You know....I can still feel the warmth of your voice on my face from the first time you whispered secrets in my ear.
You brighten my day more than the sun ever could,
And it's these moments that I wish I could live in forever,
Because it's these moments that I live for.

These sweet, sweet little moments.