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Hello i am new to the field of writing. But i love writing and i enjoy it. So i need proper guidance so that i can improve. Please review my work :)

Hi there!!! This is TY :) I'd am new to this site but would love to review your work. If you have a moment, maybe you could take a look at the new thread I started. I'm asking or help on a poem for my Mom's birthday. Thnx for any input or advice in advance!!!