Young writers Forum pain

pain is what people feel to other people its so real to other people its so real so strong we people feel pain and wonder what went wrong pain could make teras flow down your face like rain hurts you so much its like your bodies decaying not knowing what direction to go your furious the feelings you have are so serious  when you turn to one direction you see the liight you turn to the opposite its like your eyes dont have sight     (ps ............ theres more to this poem its just that i want everybody to tell me what they think about it