Lance

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Posted 17 Years Ago

No, I don't feel shot down. Just giving you a suggestion; whether or not you take it is up to you. In the end, we, each of us, do what works for us. That said, I disagree with what you say about how paragraphs are structured in novels (I've read plenty with one sentence paragraphs), but no sense in beating a dead horse. Thanks for hearing me out, at least.

Until next time.

Posted 17 Years Ago

You're welcome pal. I'll have to continue on to chapter three pretty soon! I love that you use Agent 47 for the picture, haha. Very cool. I wrote an assassin story as well if you're interested in reading it. I dunno. It's on my page: The Obedient Assassin in two parts. A bit long...but you know how that goes, haha.
Catch you later.

_A

Posted 17 Years Ago

Well, well, well... if it isn't the head chief himself. I wonder which complex computer algorithm analysis program you used to find me in here. All the hours you musta spent sorting through tons and tons of names and profiles and other combinations just to find me so you can read my sublime pieces of work. :P

Thanks for the comment, chief. Still have to find time to read and review some of your work.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, Lance. Your comments have made me more curious about your Assassin series, and I will definitely have to get back to reading it when I get a chance!

Posted 17 Years Ago

I was going through my previous reviews and saw that I hadn't added you. I build my reading friendships based on significant opinions and contributions to my work. I don't go trolling, sadly, for other folks because I just get too damn busy. So, I go through my messages periodically to get updated with the work of those who took the time to read mine.

I'm glad to have you here.

Regards,
Matthew

Posted 17 Years Ago

Thanks for the review of "Judgement: by accident or design". It had beeen awhile since I had any reviews I almost forgot the cafe was here, lol. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :)

- Paul

Posted 17 Years Ago

hey thanks for your reveiw, loads of helpful stuff-i need that.
i'll work on editing it when i am done, perhaps you could help?
anyway thanks heaps again,
~Jazlean

Posted 17 Years Ago

hey welcome to the site, I'm glad you liked my piece The Test of I, though it is one of my oldest works (did it when I was 13). It doesn't have the detail or skill I have now. I appreciate your thoughts.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Hey there. Thanks for the review. I'll have to start reading your work here, too. As to the spider, I'm not sure exactly how that's going to work here at this point, but I have some ideas that I'll have to think on. Cheers! Rob