The End

They'll see,

They'll all see,

Exactly what's become of me.

I'll show them,

I'll show them all,

They will be the ones to fall.

I've paid my dues,

I've done my time,

Now it is the end.

Just wait for me

And you will see

Exactly what I meant...

Author's Note

I wrote this about two years ago. Reading it now, then ending seems a little... forced? I don't know, but it seems off. Either way, it's an old one that I may re-visit and tweak.

Reviews

[Jim Parson]

I think I agree with you, Eva. I can feel the emotion and the undertone of rage and the underlying threat. Somehow, the ending doesn't maintain that tone for me, although I can't figure out why because the words do follow the thought. Even so, I really like it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good write. I can feel the anger. I like it though the way it is. I mean if you tweak the ending a little bit it won't seem as forced. It still was a really nice write. Thanks for sharing.

[Matthew Smith]

It all seemed to flow fine and nicely, right up to that last sentence, which, while still adding to the overall theme of the work, brought it to an abrupt, screeching halt. Still a nice write.

[Mauricio Montoya]

The end of one thing could be the beginning. We learn from past dues and grow to move forward. I like how you get this point across, that in the end we will see who you've become and like all things there is always chance for change, whether it be you or this piece.
Excellent write.

[reminder]

Very powerful and intense. Reads like an ultimatum. Well done!