Soldier of passion

Soldier of passion

A Poem by V.J.C.
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"kiss me sweet, kiss me tender for the light is quickly fading"

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Kiss me sweet, kiss me tender for the light is quickly fading
 Soon our time will be spent and our moment lost
   So here i beg you to delve into the passion of our very souls
Once so shy in this world, with you my love i feel so free
 Heart pounding with excitement as you explore my body with knowledgeable fingers
 As you press soft moist lips upon bare skin i feel like a goddess that you worship
 Unique i feel in this space of time for ordinariness has vanished with one steamy glance 
You smile down at me as we embrace like so many have in the past
Yet, as breaths mingle  and eye lids lower i know this is better than them all
Night now almost over our love still burns, more brightly then ever before
For more love and passion is poured forth than any other could
 A savage need grows as the years of agonizing fear and loneliness melts on our heated skin
Tears fall down my face as the sky brighten in the horizon for our time has drawn to a close
 Screams rip from my already worn throat as loving eyes filled with defeat gazed upon me
 The  time has come our passion still there is torn apart as you vanish in the distance 
Darkness cloaks me with depression as fear consume me while i wonder if i will ever see my love again

© 2012 V.J.C.



Author's Note

V.J.C.
I wrote this for all those people that had to see their loved ones leave for any which reason..... I my not have felt so many things yet in life for my life has still many more years to come, but i feel connected to this some how.
Thanks for taking the time to read this.

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We really don't see the tender sweet love that once was. I liked very your beginning it's that tenderness I have missed, you know before your first kiss, when holding hands is what you look forward to.

Fav Line: "You smile down at me as we embrace like so many have in the past
Yet, as breaths mingle and eye lids lower i know this is better than them all"

It was just so beautiful and had an old world feel, where romance is possible, passion is alive and forbidden love is ever so present.

This piece though a sad ending... really put me in a good mood.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Moving words. Very well written. You may not feel so experienced in life, but clearly your an old soul. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very Passionate. I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Imaginative well expressed write.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Its hard for the soldier to leave all the things behind that enrapture him .. But for the sake of duty,every soldier has to be deprived of such..
It was an intensively great piece.. :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


passionate indeed, well written, nice flowing poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


i'm not one for love poetry but this was really good. the passion could be felt clearly. i enjoyed it

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your poem vividly describes the passion found between married couples. In the second-to-last sentence it appears confusing, needing some attention. Sometimes, after waiting several days, you can carefully read your writing, trying to picture yourself as an outsider reading it for the first time. Does it make sense, need a change in punctuation? Then you can do a re-write and make it even better. Good imagination.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Good to be a Soldier of passion. Good use of hope and energy. I like the powerful description and the strong ending to the story in the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


beautiful

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on June 6, 2012
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