Broken

just made this for a girl i liked once

Why cant i sleep at night?

It causes one big fright

I just wanna close my eyes and die.

I'm here without you so i might just try.

So why not just lie and forget about you.

You broke my heart in too.

Author's Note

blah yea its short and badish deal with it

Reviews

[Invisable_Girl]

i went thru sumthing like this recently.....great write. :)

[DontBlink158]

It's sad but has a ring to it that i like. Nice write.

[Becky Clancy]

Wow, that was deep :(

Short, simple, emotional, and oh don't forget straight to the point! Nice job, Romeo!

[She of Three Personalit..]

Really good...But you spelled two, too.

[The Pretender]

i love how your rhymes just flow into eachother. i love short poems, so you had me at the first line(;

[Tasha]

Wow, this was beautiful and heartbreaking. Great write.

[Haley Lynn Thomas]

Beautiful and heartbreaking! A very nice job, I'm impressed!

[Roe]

I can relate to this so much. Great write my dear friend

[Eileen]

I can relate. The 3rd and 4th line kind of broke the flow with the poem though.