Hear The Heart Sing

Hear The Heart Sing

A Poem by ASHIDASH
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The first time you really fall in love, '' The lyrics arises from your love, the music is from your heartbeat the voice is from your heart'' And at that moment, you'll hear your heart sing....

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I have a book, written in gold,
words of passion and words of trust
Read and see, the future unfolds
It's all about love, which will never rust

Heavenly words, your heart can fly,
lost in dreams, high in the sky
no more sadness, tears will dry
Deep and true, your heart will sing

Many a times, we went through troubles,
 a hundred times we fired at each other
Never mind, they were all like bubbles,
which bump up in water and blast one another

You are the lamp, my only light
No matter what happens, our future is bright
It's for you my honey, I will fight
Strength and courage, your heart will sing

Dawn or dusk you stayed with me,
tears in your eyes, let them free
I'm always there, when you want to see,
the baby of the gem, you'll always be

Our feet together, they'll never think to part
Our hands together and that will be forever
I'm the little gem, that lights your heart
Tough and strong, your heart will sing

Thousands of thoughts, flock in my mind
I want to get lost and be alone with you
The deep you look, the more you'll find
stars of dreams, I'll make them true

Love is a dream, for a wedding ring
Love is a bond, I'd call it a link
Feel the joy, the seasons bring
Trust and faith, your heart will sing



© 2014 ASHIDASH



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I loved the tag line to this Ashi - just lovely.
And the reptition of 'your heart will sing' drives home the message (even if it slightly affects the flow, for me) - some gorgeous phrases and the love is abundant throughout - great sentiments


Posted 2 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sir
ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thank you sir
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Gee
A really nice poem to read,Ashidash

Posted 2 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thank you Gee
a great poem with sensational structure enjoyed reading it ... peace :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sreenath
Please forgive me having only just read this. It is a wonderful gem of a poem, as beautiful as its sentiment and lasting as its subject. Excellent work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much
a beautiful poem for the loved one....amazing...well done

Posted 3 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

2 Years Ago

Thank you Anshul
delicate words pleasant in sight of reader with good expressiion.

thanks for share

Posted 3 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

3 Years Ago

Thank you sir
I hear you swooning in your love for him. Your song is like a symphony.

Posted 3 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

3 Years Ago

Thanks sir. This is truly What I felt about him. My very own experience.
Very beautiful sentiments and well versed...I can tell the words flow from your heart. Good work!
You might look at the following lines as substitutes... the usage was unclear at these spots, nothing major and maybe you have your own way to reword them since these are only suggestions:

hundreds if times, or a hundred times; blast one another; and be alone with you; the deeper you look;

Again, nice job! I hope to read more of your work...

Posted 3 Years Ago


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ASHIDASH

3 Years Ago

Sure sir, I'll reword them right now. Thank you sir for showing those errors
A very honest declaration of love. I really appreciated the way you explained what love meant and how it unfolded for you. It is extremely lively even young love. all this binded by rhyme that skipped and bounced.

Thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


ASHIDASH

3 Years Ago

Thank you for encouraging me.

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