A Fragile World

Our society's impact on other's lives

Our world functions based on its rules and restrictions,

For this is the only way for people to be obedient and not full of violent rage.

This world of anger still exists somewhere in the universe,

But all we are doing is covering it with a bandage,

So it doesn't become a reality.

If one flaw is made in our society,

Anarchy and war will become our new guidelines,

Instead of peace and love.

Let my voice be heard,

For it speaks the truth

Of how our world can become chaos

If we make one small mistake.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think of this one. I love constructive criticism.

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

"If one flaw is made in our society,
Anarchy and war will become our new guidelines,
Instead of peace and love.

Let my voice be heard,
For it speaks the truth
Of how our world can become chaos
If we make one small mistake."

Verily I should say you that our society is something that do not make us to walk on our feet and do not ride on a vehicle. To say, Our society is a single body with two opposite faces. I like your work. The only thing it needs is some more rhymes so that while intonation, one should read it with all the charms of music. Keep writing.