Sanjeedgi

Sanjeedgi

A Poem by Abhishek Asthana
"

When someone you love deeply treats you as if you were nothing, its nearly impossible not to feel you truly are nothing.

"

Farmaaya jis pal usne, beshak badi aasaani se,

Ke kuch b nhi rha baaki abse hamare darmiyan...

 

Bataye kya tumko aakhir, kya guzri thi tute dil par,

Barso k bune ye khwaab apne, ik thokar me jo hue dhuaan...

 

Jisko rab ka rutba de baithe the hum pehli fursat me,

Usne hi chcheeni kadmo se zameen aur sar se aasmaan...

 

Bakhoobi hum khare utre ulfat ke sab paimaano par,

Aadhi raah me wo chchod gy, jinke waaste chchoda ye jahaan...

 

Khudgarzi ab aisi bhi kya jo bhule tum har daastan,

Chaman apna roshan kr lia, yun jalakar mera aashiyaan...

 

Sanjeedgi gar tum muhabbat ki samajh paate meri,

To peechey nhi hat te kadam, na todte mera gumaan...

 

Tasveer utaari hardum jiski dil par, ranj isi ka h,

Betakalluf ho us shakhs ne mitaaye mere hi nishaan...

 

Hume zindagi to ab apnaane se rahi par gam nahi,

Intezaar bus us lamhe ka hai kab maut ho jaaye meharbaan...   


© 2017 Abhishek Asthana



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This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.

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Another great piece of work.Enjoyed

Posted 1 Month Ago


Beautiful words.Even more beautiful feelings.I especially liked the fact that you honestly expressed your feelings,not caring if you came across as a weak person who finds it difficult to move on.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

4 Months Ago

thank you so much brinda... this writer is so negative, it is harder to identify the feeling of love.. read more
A touching nd emotional write..it was so beautifully written... wonderful.. I loved it..

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

4 Months Ago

thanks a lot,, yes it is an emotional write,, i am glad you liked it
Sofia

4 Months Ago

You're welcome
Bhut hi khubsurat . . . dil ko chho lene waali lines . . . . great work

Posted 4 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

4 Months Ago

i am glad you like it,,, bht bht shukriya :)
very emotion and sad stuff ...bt beautifully written and expressed..

Posted 5 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

4 Months Ago

thank you so much buddy
You use these hindi so perfectly to make it into a poem ..that's not everyone's cup of tea

Posted 5 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

i love to write in both the languages,,, and assistance of urdu has been admirable everytime...
As usual ur poems are impressive. Very nice dear. Ur poems takes me in another world. Superb

Posted 5 Months Ago


Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

That's the huge compliment for me... Thanks a lot for reading... appreciation means a lot !!
Lovely poem expressing your feelings.....and beautifully penned it.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much priyanshi :)
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

pleasure is mine.
very nice lines! i m impressed

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Abhishek Asthana

5 Months Ago

thank u so much 4 reading... m glad u liked it

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Abhishek Asthana
Abhishek Asthana

Lucknow , The City of Nawabs, India



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Don't judge me on the basis of my creativity... M a bit common person who sometimes can imagine things on a high note bt not positive many times... who always keen to observe things on a very minute l.. more..

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