Hug your mom

Sometimes all you need a tight hug from your mother and surely all your stress will melt away.

It's been aforecited earlier many times,

Mother is the perplexing discovery of the deity.

This is a kind of unwordly dilemma of emotions,

Which cannot be ameliorated through any treaty.

 

 

There is nothing beyond her grasp,

What does infant hurriedly require.

The way she converses with a kid,

It's a marvellous art which none of us acquire.

 

 

During childhood days mom acts like mentor,

Then afterwards she turns into counsellor.

Periodically she promotes herself into different characters,

Her own versatility is really as spectacular.

 

 

She enshrouds lapse made by the children,

And can willingly confront with any hindrance.

In sake of her kids, she resolves any conflict,

She overcomes any battle with her brilliance.

 

 

Though she knows, babies have grown up into adults,

Then too she wants to pamper and feed them by spoon,

Heartily she is an epitome of sacrifices,

For child having mother itself is a priceless boon.

Author's Note

i just wanted to share this one on the occasion of mother's day but that day i was too busy in missing my mom... her love for me is like nothing else in the world... miss you a lot mom

Reviews

[Aradhana]

A great poem showing what a mother does for her children. How much ever we try to describe her love, dedication,care and sacrifice for us we won't be ale to coz it's beyond words. Those feelings we get from her, that security and all is just beyond the reach of words. If we are something today then its probably due to the values our mothers inculcated in us....Indeed ur mum will be glad to hear this

[Abhishek Asthana]

She left me so early, but her soul must have been delighted to see a very small tribute towards her... I really miss her... Thanks for your kind words !!

[Aradhana]

kehte h ki agar duaa dil se nikli h toh vo pohoch hi jaati h.... well everyone has to go but their love and affection remains with us forever...she may be blessing u from the heavens above... :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

Bus isi soch aur umeed ke saath insaan apni kam ya lambi zindagi jee jata hai... so totally agreed... All i have to say is < Maa ka hona bohot zaruri hota hai >...

[Aradhana]

sahi baat h maa hoti h toh ek security rehti h duniya uske daman s bohot sundar lagti but jab vo jati h toh aisa lagta h duniya me ab kuch bacha hi nhi

[Abhishek Asthana]

Exactly, so jis bacche ke liye kuch bacha na ho use sab bacha-kucha sa hi lagta ha puri duniya me.... Since childhood i have been going through this pain..!

[Aradhana]

But since u have cm this far this is just due to her love and her care only which is in the form of blessings from go☺️☺️

[Abhishek Asthana]

Undoubtedly

[Jessica Lima]

This is so full of truth! Made my heart ache! You woke a child-like part of me that was dormant. Thank You for that. Just.. Amazing.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much jessica... and that's exactly what i desire, just wanted to revive a child-like character for a while in my friends to let they show the gratitude towards the destiny that it has given the world's biggest happiness to them. :)

[Divyani]

For every child there is mother. Its just some can see n some can feel. N those who feel are the boon in it self.
Very well written dear. I m proud of u. Its lovely.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much divyani... that was quite enough to console me... classification is always there in love even...i am glad you liked it :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Abhishek, this is so well written! You have conveyed all the feelings that I may not have been able to write on paper! Great work :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

that was really an encouraging review...thanks you so much for reading this one... i am really glad u liked it... appreciation means a lot

[Sofia]

A really great poem..I really really loved it....I just don't have words to describe it...Thank you so much for sharing..each and every line is so touching..An amazing write..Moms are truly blessings from God for us...I just can't tell how much I loved this poem :)

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much sofia... if you guys are liking it in this way then i hope even my mom must be liking it from the heaven... what else i would demand

[Sofia]

Of course..not liking...she would be loving it..nd ur poem truly deserved the appreciation it got...😊

[Priyanshi]

Truly wonderful poem...
Your lines touched me. The last line is the most beautiful line.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank u so much priyanshi... m glad u liked it

[Priyanshi]

my pleasure.

[Surya]

Every day is a mother's day.....
And coming to your write, filled with affection....and that's true having a mother itself is a boon...I loved it..:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

yes i am affectionate to my mother and so this poem is full of affection...totally agreed everyday is a mothers day so we should never leave an opportunity to make her feel happy...thanks for reading surya

[Zephyr]

"For child having mother itself is a priceless boon."- This line is what touched me the most. It is so very true.
I can't imagine my life without my mom. She is everything for me.
Your poem is one of the best poems I have read about mothers.
The words you chose and the entire flow is great.
Thanks for sharing:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

that's true that mother is a boon and my this boon has been taken back away from me long time back... but i am always willing to make people understand that they are blessed with this treasure... so always love and respect.. thank you for reading

[Zephyr]

Am sorry to hear that....
Its nice of you to make people understand the love of a mother😊
Always a pleasure to read your works.

[Zoya]

Oh, this is very deep and complex. You used some nice words...I had to look up for some meanings tbh. It's quite emotional, I could feel your words. Well done you!

[Abhishek Asthana]

thanks for your kind words Zoe... its good to know u liked it... thank you for reading

[Zoya]

No worries

[Farhan Shaikh]

Emotional and heartwarming..
Amazing piece i really like this.

[Abhishek Asthana]

thank you so much farhan... its good to know u liked it

[Ayush Mishra]

Well written... itni achi ki sayd unhone bhi pardh li hogi...and one more things my friend...she is still with us...sumtimes through ur writings...
sumtimes...through ur memorable places..like that park near our school jhaa pe tumne mostly cheeje discuss ki h, sumtimes...through ur besties...
sumtimes...by the food which u make...or dishes..or even that hard bt perfect tea...
And I think u got my point what I want to say...

keep doing all these things...she always want to see ur smiling face..which u lost sumwhere in ur running life...

may, it is difficult for u to read all this...bt believe me..it is also difficult for me to write these things..

[Abhishek Asthana]

i do believe so...i feel her presence around me...really miss her... life seems just like empty box without her

[Ayush Mishra]

I can understand...