In love with you

In love with you

A Poem by Bohdyna
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Something like a declaration of love. When you love someone, you want to be loved in return.

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Show it to me, the
demon in you, and watch
me stay, they don't
scare me.
Everything about you, even
your imperfections, makes
you perfect.
Now my heart is sick, longing
for love, only you can
heal, then you will
know
I am in love with you.

© 2017 Bohdyna



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Bohdyna
I'm new to this and I really want to know everything you think. Thank you.

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Yes, this flows from your heart. I like it because it shows acceptance. in this world where divorce is heavy option for way out, not putting a "tag" on relationship for younger people, fully accepting people and having unconditional love is rare. This is the same angle I came from when i wrote a poem "rare"

Well done dear.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

i love the way you view things. thank you
Mirror

2 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend....



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I'm new too but it's really beautiful.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

I'm glad you like it. Thanks for your review
Yes, this flows from your heart. I like it because it shows acceptance. in this world where divorce is heavy option for way out, not putting a "tag" on relationship for younger people, fully accepting people and having unconditional love is rare. This is the same angle I came from when i wrote a poem "rare"

Well done dear.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

i love the way you view things. thank you
Mirror

2 Months Ago

Thank you dear friend....
strange what love bring into us, all those feelings but yet I am grateful for it.

I hope it continue inspiring you, would love to read more from your poetry keep it up .

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Your review made my day!

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Added on September 29, 2017
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Tags: Love, poetry, love poems, short poem, in love, teen, declaration of love

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Bohdyna
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I love words and I'm learning to fathom them into constellation of beautiful phrases. Check my tumblr_blog for my quotes http://www.tumblr.com/abyss_of_words more..

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