Imagine you were mine

Imagine you were mine

A Poem by Bohdyna
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When you have a crush on someone, even if you can't have them, they become all you think and imagine.

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I know I can’t have you, 
that’s why I console memo y heart 
with my own mental scenarios;
sometimes, we cuddle,
the bed soft and comfy 
you wrap me in your sweet embrace
and kiss me tenderly
Your lips are soft
I can feel Your breath 
Steady, warm, calm
It awakens my senses, my body
Shivers crawl down my spine
It felt so real 
except, sadly, it wasn’t the reality
I suffer for you are not mine
Let me hope,
Let me wish, 
Let me imagine you were mine.

© 2017 Bohdyna



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Bohdyna
I'm interested in what you think. :-)

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My dear, I don't get the "...memo y heart" and "rap" or do you mean "wrap"?

"Your lips are soft
I can feel Your breath
Steady, warm, calm
It awakens my senses, my body
Shivers crawl down my spine
It felt so real "

Lovely. :) only if this person knows what he/she is missing. A sweet love.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

Thanks for noticing the error, and your review made my day!



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Seductively Fantasizing

Great Read

Matthew

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

1 Month Ago

Thanks Matt
Matthew Kult

1 Month Ago

You are welcome

Matthew
It's super lovely, and kinda scary reading the longing and emotions circling around that unreciprocated feeling. I hope you feel full with love, and it's not hurting your own being. I'm not meaning to hawk in on the feelings more than the writing, I promise ahah

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

Before posting this, I made few people read it including my teacher, and I had to write P.S telling.. read more
You should read my story it called The Undiscovered. I new hear.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

Of course I will read your story, thank you for asking.
BlackCheetah

2 Months Ago

Thank you I really appreciate it
My dear, I don't get the "...memo y heart" and "rap" or do you mean "wrap"?

"Your lips are soft
I can feel Your breath
Steady, warm, calm
It awakens my senses, my body
Shivers crawl down my spine
It felt so real "

Lovely. :) only if this person knows what he/she is missing. A sweet love.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohdyna

2 Months Ago

Thanks for noticing the error, and your review made my day!

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Added on October 5, 2017
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Tags: Love, poetry, love poem, crush, teen, I love you

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Bohdyna
Bohdyna

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I love words and I'm learning to fathom them into constellation of beautiful phrases. Check my tumblr_blog for my quotes http://www.tumblr.com/abyss_of_words more..

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