Imagine you were mine

When you have a crush on someone, even if you can't have them, they become all you think and imagine.

I know I can’t have you, 
that’s why I console my heart 
with my own mental scenarios;
sometimes, we cuddle,
the bed soft and comfy 
you wrap me in your sweet embrace
and kiss me tenderly
Your lips are soft
I can feel Your breath 
Steady, warm, calm
It awakens my senses, my body
Shivers crawl down my spine
It felt so real 
except, sadly, it wasn’t the reality
I suffer for you are not mine
Let me hope,
Let me wish, 
Let me imagine you were mine.

Author's Note

I'm interested in what you think. :-)

Reviews

[Mirror]

My dear, I don't get the "...memo y heart" and "rap" or do you mean "wrap"?

"Your lips are soft
I can feel Your breath
Steady, warm, calm
It awakens my senses, my body
Shivers crawl down my spine
It felt so real "

Lovely. :) only if this person knows what he/she is missing. A sweet love.

[Bohdyna]

Thanks for noticing the error, and your review made my day!

[Matthew Kult]

Seductively Fantasizing

Great Read

Matthew

[Bohdyna]

Thanks Matt

[Matthew Kult]

You are welcome

Matthew

[josh bright]

It's super lovely, and kinda scary reading the longing and emotions circling around that unreciprocated feeling. I hope you feel full with love, and it's not hurting your own being. I'm not meaning to hawk in on the feelings more than the writing, I promise ahah

[Bohdyna]

Before posting this, I made few people read it including my teacher, and I had to write P.S telling them i'm not in love. I don't think they believe me though. LoL
My goal is to evoke people's emotions, feel free hawk down on every words.
Your review blew me up, I think I'm going to laugh all day. Thank you.

[BlackCheetah]

You should read my story it called The Undiscovered. I new hear.

[Bohdyna]

Of course I will read your story, thank you for asking.

[BlackCheetah]

Thank you I really appreciate it