A Bizarre feeling !!

Just tried to explain my friend’s feeling, his state of mind when he was unwillingly involved with an unknown.....to whom he could not generate even a single hatch of lust, but had made......!!

He exclaimed hesitantly, and shared with me ::

“It was a bizarre feeling!

Life stores different surprises! I heard, I knew it……but felt it today in real.

It was purely a surprise to me today, she (an unknown lass) came like an unexpected !

She was never known to me, nor have I ever imagined that I would make love with her...but it had happened! A few moments of converse and hissy clack has led us to………and we made love………….!!

    

The time was quite intrinsic, but several things were revolving around my mind. I lost somehow within the ‘gyrated mixture of feelings’ ~ unknown, semi-pleasant, half-hidden, incomplete sense of feelings !!

 

Every breath of her was a signal that she was being comforted. But I could not show my original sense that it was just a mix feeling from my side……….; I was not able to devote upto the depth of intimacy that is required, though that was not felt by her !!!!    

 

Now I am with a mixed feeling, what a dilemma !! Can’t even be stored within me, can’t be disposed either! (So I simply shared to you my friend……………..)

Lastly, her good words were pleasing....rather have provoked me with the sense that she would want to come back for a similar love-time again! 

But would I be able to ready for that, again !! ?? ”

………………………………………………..

With a promise to dream-in again ~ Adi

Reviews

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Every question has taken birth with an answer...just a search is needed to discover!
My friend, your friend is/was having a concentrating problem I guess...as the feelings of him was mixed, had questions deep down I've to say.....
Great read😊

[Prritiy]

nicely written. it could be well developed into a story, try it :)

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks a lot Prritiy !

[Prritiy]

you are welcome.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Cheers my friend !!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I think you have a very interesting premise here that is completely brilliant.

Your concept of flow is very good and your descriptions are excellent.

Also you did a very good job with the right illustration.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks a lot.....for good words, it's inspiring for a beginner like me !!
And I must say -- your review comment is itself a 'nice piece of writing', u r always an amazing writer Ani ! Cheers !!