Hey, you! Yes, you!

Hey, you! Yes, you!

A Poem by Agnibo
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When loving someone leaves you heartbroken and you fret that further loving someone else will do the same.

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Hey, you! Yes, you!
Those are broken heart's pieces of mine.
Which got shattered by love with time.
But, never mind, you can shatter them, too.

Yes, you can hurt me, too.
You can kill me one more,
As I am already dead to the core.
Yes, you can! That's what people always do.

© 2017 Agnibo



Author's Note

Agnibo
Any king of criticism will be highly appreciated.
Do correct me if there is any kind of mistake.

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Not everyone hurt nor everyone can heal a pain.
But some people are like medicines that heal everything and bring happiness into the dead life.
Never give up on love coz its universal theory that:
"If love can hurt us then it is love that heals us".
Nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Yes, you are right. :) It love which can heal any scar. :)
Thank you for reading, Manasa. :)



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Nicely written..you have summed up the sadness and the grief of being hurt due to a loved one in simple words. Love the simplicity..

Posted 8 Months Ago


Your wounded heart will mend in time. Truly loving someone is always a risk, but as the saying goes, "Better to have loved and lost than never loved at all." Thank you for sharing this special write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Yes, that's right. :) It is better to have loved and lost than to have never lover at all. :)
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Penning such emotions down is good way to deal with them. Not only does it clear our mind and heart but make us value and learn from the experience. Again we do fret about lot of things. 😁

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Yes, I write whenever I feel low. It is really a good way to deal with such emotions. :)
Than.. read more
This is so sad :( why do you always have to make me blue? :p

You write so well! Thanks for sharing


Posted 8 Months Ago


Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Thanks a lot, Sonakshi. :) TYSM!
And, you are welcome. Next time I will try to write a happy .. read more
Sonakshi Arora

8 Months Ago

Yes, please do so 😂😂😂
There is so much emotion in your poetry
Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Yes, I will try to. 😁 I just write what I feel. So.... :D
But the next piece will be a hap.. read more
Amazing poem. No one has the right to Break our hearts, I loved the sarcasm in it. Keep writing!👍

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :) Yes, no one has the right to break our heart.
Thanks for reading, Anja.. read more
Hey, You! Yes, You!
I love this! Thank you for sharing your raw, real emotion.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Thank you so, so, much. :) I am glad you liked it. You are welcome.
A very sad write. Very well expressed your emotions. I liked the line in the end when you said that's what people do. It hit so hard.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

I am glad you liked it. :) Yes! That's what I wanted to express through it.
Thanks for readin.. read more
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
Not everyone hurt nor everyone can heal a pain.
But some people are like medicines that heal everything and bring happiness into the dead life.
Never give up on love coz its universal theory that:
"If love can hurt us then it is love that heals us".
Nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agnibo

8 Months Ago

Yes, you are right. :) It love which can heal any scar. :)
Thank you for reading, Manasa. :)

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Agnibo
Agnibo

Assam, India



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Hello! I am Agnibo Chakrabory. I am from India. I am a wanna be poet and novelist. I love Composing poems of various forms. Amoung my favourite poems, I love the poem, "Don't stant at my grave and wee.. more..

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