Flood

Flood

A Poem by Alexa Apothic Red

I want to be the flood in you
That never ceases

A depth that never runs shallow
And never releases

I want you to be the deepest in me
I want you to be the deepest part of me

I want to gaze so deeply in your eyes
That I reach the core of your soul there
(You are there)
And wrap it up with mine
(And I in yours)

© 2018 Alexa Apothic Red



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Hmm, the flood intensifies as the souls of waves intertwine. I guess I can resonate with this well because I'm a Pisces. lol My favorite line is, " that I reach the core of your soul there" . It reminds me of our hearts and spirits and how our emotions and experiences could feel infinite in the moment. I hope you flood turns into a future storm of passion. great work and keep writing. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexa Apothic Red

9 Months Ago

Once again I'm humbled by your review and enlightened by a fresh perspective.. I love what you said .. read more



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Hmm, the flood intensifies as the souls of waves intertwine. I guess I can resonate with this well because I'm a Pisces. lol My favorite line is, " that I reach the core of your soul there" . It reminds me of our hearts and spirits and how our emotions and experiences could feel infinite in the moment. I hope you flood turns into a future storm of passion. great work and keep writing. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexa Apothic Red

9 Months Ago

Once again I'm humbled by your review and enlightened by a fresh perspective.. I love what you said .. read more
Lovely, this.
A depth that never runs shallow.
Love that.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexa Apothic Red

9 Months Ago

That was my favorite line too. There's something about that kind of depth in another and also that t.. read more
Beautifully written! The rhyme flows so well in this clever piece.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexa Apothic Red

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I am humbled! Thank you for taking the time to review!

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Added on February 12, 2018
Last Updated on February 12, 2018
Tags: Love, romance, passion, lust, depth, deep, flood, souls, connecting, connection, eyes, gaze, core, together

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Alexa Apothic Red
Alexa Apothic Red

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I am very passionate in life and in writing. I am also a singer and songwriter. Swim in my words, take up residence in my mind... Inspire me, and I hope to do the same for you... I thrive on creati.. more..

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