Dreaming of A Paradise

A scenic nature poem about a paradise,

I am dreaming of a paradise

where the trees grow

in a sprawling green mass

and the rivers run warm

down to streams of silver glass.

I am dreaming of a paradise

where flowers sway in tranquil winds,

and sprout in crowded beds

as bees dance among the sleeping heads.

I am dreaming of a paradise

where fruits dangle ripe from trees,

and I may extend my hand 

to pick one with ease.

I am dreaming of a paradise

abundant with swirling ponds

that sit in the gentle shade

of a palm's green fronds,

so that I may dip my tired feet in.

I am dreaming of a paradise

where burdens are left in the greenery,

and a troubled mind may rest

among the birdsong and scenery...

Author's Note

Be honest.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Altho I often write highly-structured rhymes myself, I very much enjoy it when other poets do their rhymes in a less structured way, as well as varying the stanza lengths here & there, making your words feel more relaxed & carefree, which reflects your message here. Your descriptions are not highly crafted with unusual word choices, but the overall message ends up being interesting & compelling becuz your simple straightforward style puts us in the right mood . . . ready to be open to something rewarding in life (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful and hopeful poem. I have the same wish. Thank you Alexis for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Oooh I felt I was there in paradise
Beautiful