Forbidden Secrets

Some times we can't help but act out against those that are closest to us. But what if we go too far?

The storm clouds were gathering overhead and I knew that I had done the right thing. I gazed down at my blood-stained hands as they slowly began to shake, the same tremor that ran through my entire body. A sob escaped my lips; it was only then that I realized that tears were spilling down my cheeks in cascades, leaving tell-tale signs through the mud, dirt and blood that had been smeared there.
I slowly clenched my stiff hands into fists, fighting back the overwhelming emotions inside of anger, disappointment, and a deep sense of longing. I found my gaze being drawn again to the hole in the ground, willing myself to move away, any distance would do, an inch would hinder my sight from the lifeless body of my sister. But I couldn't, my muscles had seized up and refused to obey. I was rooted to the spot by my own fear as the violent scene replayed in my mind.

Author's Note

I know there's not much here for a first chapter but there is a pre-written second chapter. I want to know whether it's worth continuing it. Lemme know what you think! :)