The vampires.

The vampires.

A Poem by Aly
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The vampires marched forward to kill me,
Their beauty especially flagrant.
Their leader bared a grin,
Looking extremely sadistic.
I shivered as a natural response,
As if somebody had put ice down my pants.
They came to a halt in front of me,
And I cowered in fear,
And that’s all I remember of my former life,
For I had become their meal.

© 2009 Aly


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It's nice but not all vampires kill!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love it! I think short poems are the best, and you really know how to get a message across in only a few lines. Great job! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like it. short but discriptive. kudos!

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is simple yet pretty.

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i thought this was good. i am also a major fan myself. can i saw that i like the kinda scary/evil/demented ending? usually i dont go for that but this was cool.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this it reminds me of twilight. I love the books!!! the movie is good too :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 13, 2009
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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly