Illusion

Illusion

A Poem by Arielle Ann
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Well this is my first Haiku...with immense help from Mr. Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram( WC)...am very new, so please pardon me if there are any technical errors...I may not have done full justice to the job.

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Behind countless illusions

like shadows dart

the sale of sun rays!


© 2012 Arielle Ann



Author's Note

Arielle Ann
This was about people running behind illusions the whole life,like those shadows which are deceiving to our eyes.we tend to forget that all shadows are because of one light source-the sun;and many a time we forget to recognize that single person who may be standing right next to us when we are busy following deceivers of true love-yes this was also inspired by love in the lap of nature;because there is no other greater teacher than the Mother Almighty! :)

And Thank you in advance for pointing out errors, since this is my first time in Haiku!

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I am really proud of you that your first Haiku is enlighting the nature's teaching and richness in the word coining. All the feed back are nice and encouraging you like anything. Thank U much for mentioning my name. Well, expecting more haiku from your pen. With regards.



Posted 6 Years Ago


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Nice work, specially trying it out for the first time.

Posted 6 Years Ago


So much said in with so few words. This piece is rich in meaning. Great Haiku

Posted 6 Years Ago


i enjoyed your first line very much, there is depth beyond the initial image. good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


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nice job,,,,,

Posted 6 Years Ago


I am really proud of you that your first Haiku is enlighting the nature's teaching and richness in the word coining. All the feed back are nice and encouraging you like anything. Thank U much for mentioning my name. Well, expecting more haiku from your pen. With regards.



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HAIKU!!! its like an addiction... now that u have done it and may I say you did an outstanding job... you'll want to do more... HAVE FUN!!!
**write...write on!!**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Your first Haiku is well done... It's nice to see you branching out. The "Illusion" is a great theme to start with. Nice work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


A interesting poem. Very hard to create poetry in so few words. I like your poem. Made me think of the sale of sun rays upon our thoughts and life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great first Haiku.
Keep on and you will find it fun to attempt to give messages through these.:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very awesome..deeply Nested meaning bursts here.. :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Arielle Ann
Arielle Ann

Bangalore, India



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