Sadness

Sadness

A Chapter by Closed
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the soft grey breeze
of a winter morning

cooling the embers
of stirring life

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© 2016 Closed



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I think you just managed to sum up how my day today has felt in so few words, that have evaded my thinking, until now. Reading your words again (and again) have made me realise that it has been a silent day in my head, where usually a few storms pass through and shake things up.
Slightly envious of your talent for saying so much in so few words. (Okay, a lot envious) :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lorry.

11 Months Ago

Aw (blush blush) Thank you Ana, you are too kind. I was actually thinking today that maybe, today is.. read more
Closed

11 Months Ago

who knows... blagh
i feel like i need to write something happy
Lorry.

11 Months Ago

I was just thinking the same thing. So far, I have a page open and was going to write about my fanta.. read more



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You're less is more approach to some of your poems is humbling and inspiring.
'... grey breeze... ' is very creative phrasing.
:)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Closed

10 Months Ago

yeah, totally... potatoes in the pot... 2pts.
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Hellayeah!
Slam dunk that silverside (thats a cut of meat right.. ok.. just checking ) for g.. read more
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

One more thing (as Lieutenant Colombo might say)... you like new music right?
How about old.. read more
perfect picture
of January...
what will this
year bring out
from those embers
if you stir them up
a bit.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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11 Months Ago

Thank you Bacchus, who knows what the year has in store!
This reminds me of the great Permian extinction event for some reason. "The Great Dying" is what some call it, a 9 out of 10 death rate. Much like the score I am giving this tiny collection of words... 9 out of 10. (it's a fine tale of survival in the end the great Permian extinction event was)

Posted 11 Months Ago


Closed

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and I'm happy you liked it
Absolutely beautiful poem. Short but still so powerful!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Closed

11 Months Ago

Thanks Gullia!
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Sometimes those really gentle wistful thoughts ring loudest and clearest.
My day has felt like this a blue/grey kind of day. Stunning poetry Ana x

Posted 11 Months Ago


Closed

11 Months Ago

Hope the sun shines on you generously Starz. Thanks so much for your visits.
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11 Months Ago

:) yeah me too...
You're welcome, always something good going on at yours x
Dear friend. You said a lot in the short poetry. Winter can make us need someone or make us feel the deep coldness of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


Closed

11 Months Ago

Thank you, yes you are so right of course. Always appreciate your visits. Thanks!
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

I love your work and you are welcome.
I think you just managed to sum up how my day today has felt in so few words, that have evaded my thinking, until now. Reading your words again (and again) have made me realise that it has been a silent day in my head, where usually a few storms pass through and shake things up.
Slightly envious of your talent for saying so much in so few words. (Okay, a lot envious) :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lorry.

11 Months Ago

Aw (blush blush) Thank you Ana, you are too kind. I was actually thinking today that maybe, today is.. read more
Closed

11 Months Ago

who knows... blagh
i feel like i need to write something happy
Lorry.

11 Months Ago

I was just thinking the same thing. So far, I have a page open and was going to write about my fanta.. read more
Wow it's fantastic...cool mind and soul can solve any problem in life we just need to keep strength

Posted 11 Months Ago


Closed

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading my little poem, horizon.
horizon

11 Months Ago

My pleasure...I always learn from you
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