Sadness

Sadness

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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the soft grey breeze
of a winter morning

cooling the embers
of stirring life

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© 2016 Ana Papaya



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I think you just managed to sum up how my day today has felt in so few words, that have evaded my thinking, until now. Reading your words again (and again) have made me realise that it has been a silent day in my head, where usually a few storms pass through and shake things up.
Slightly envious of your talent for saying so much in so few words. (Okay, a lot envious) :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lorry forty-ten.

1 Year Ago

Aw (blush blush) Thank you Ana, you are too kind. I was actually thinking today that maybe, today is.. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

who knows... blagh
i feel like i need to write something happy
Lorry forty-ten.

1 Year Ago

I was just thinking the same thing. So far, I have a page open and was going to write about my fanta.. read more



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You're less is more approach to some of your poems is humbling and inspiring.
'... grey breeze... ' is very creative phrasing.
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

yeah, totally... potatoes in the pot... 2pts.
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

Hellayeah!
Slam dunk that silverside (thats a cut of meat right.. ok.. just checking ) for g.. read more
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

One more thing (as Lieutenant Colombo might say)... you like new music right?
How about old.. read more
perfect picture
of January...
what will this
year bring out
from those embers
if you stir them up
a bit.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you Bacchus, who knows what the year has in store!
This reminds me of the great Permian extinction event for some reason. "The Great Dying" is what some call it, a 9 out of 10 death rate. Much like the score I am giving this tiny collection of words... 9 out of 10. (it's a fine tale of survival in the end the great Permian extinction event was)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and I'm happy you liked it
Absolutely beautiful poem. Short but still so powerful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thanks Gullia!
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Sometimes those really gentle wistful thoughts ring loudest and clearest.
My day has felt like this a blue/grey kind of day. Stunning poetry Ana x

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Hope the sun shines on you generously Starz. Thanks so much for your visits.
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1 Year Ago

:) yeah me too...
You're welcome, always something good going on at yours x
Dear friend. You said a lot in the short poetry. Winter can make us need someone or make us feel the deep coldness of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you, yes you are so right of course. Always appreciate your visits. Thanks!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I love your work and you are welcome.
I think you just managed to sum up how my day today has felt in so few words, that have evaded my thinking, until now. Reading your words again (and again) have made me realise that it has been a silent day in my head, where usually a few storms pass through and shake things up.
Slightly envious of your talent for saying so much in so few words. (Okay, a lot envious) :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lorry forty-ten.

1 Year Ago

Aw (blush blush) Thank you Ana, you are too kind. I was actually thinking today that maybe, today is.. read more
Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

who knows... blagh
i feel like i need to write something happy
Lorry forty-ten.

1 Year Ago

I was just thinking the same thing. So far, I have a page open and was going to write about my fanta.. read more
Wow it's fantastic...cool mind and soul can solve any problem in life we just need to keep strength

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana Papaya

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading my little poem, horizon.
horizon

1 Year Ago

My pleasure...I always learn from you
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