"You Don't Know..."

"You Don't Know..."

A Poem by Chris

There are two flows here inseparably linked.


"You Don't Know..."

 

You just don't know -

 

How things bite ~

What things bite,

on any given day

at any given time

 

...and the dry eyes

damp mind

tight chest

as you stand, sit -

watch

...time scrolling.

 

How dark it is

after sunrise.
I made coffee - fresh,

pulled out some hazlenut creamer

- just wanted different today.

 

"These aren't regrets surfacing,"

--you do what you have to

when you must,

make choices - have decisions

and survive to live with them

- if you can

...or just live with them

- if you can't.

 

You have hurts, joys...

- moments God envies

and others the devil is still laughing over -

and which are which? - who's to say?

 

But there IS irony in living

that you don't see or appreciate -

until you do.

 

Do you think of others

as you are? were?

See them with your eyes?
Expect them to be you's?

- and you don't even understand ...yourself.

 

Breathes...

 

Chris


 

© 2012 Chris


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Stopped by..sipped tea..listening & nodding..

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another well executed poem on how we live, could live, should live, and do live.
You call us on our every turn better than anyone I know.
Well crafted Chris... another privilege to read... and ponder.

Posted 11 Years Ago


We always seek for what is rather impossible to get or hell hard to achieve. I agree 'YOU DON'T KNOW'.. . Its easy to stay happy for what you have but hard to realise it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


that was a mouthful my friend. I'm breathless after reading this...there is a certain amount of irony when it comes to how we see the world. We don't understand how much we have...until it's gone. I guess that makes us all selfish by nature.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I have read this several times today and as usual each time I read it I discover some new treasure or gem of wisdom.. I ended up here because I believed my children thought just like me.. they don't and never did.. imagine my surprise..

Posted 11 Years Ago


dark after sunrise...clever thought
so too, it can be lighter after sunset, even in total darkness. Enjoy this thoughtful write Chris

Posted 11 Years Ago


There are many times... but one live with choices made. xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Do you think of others
as you are? were?
See them with your eyes?
Expect them to be you's?"

This maybe one of my biggest self recriminations, I do tend to do this, expect them to be "me's" , have the same morals, etc..and the fact is we are all raised differently, so it still takes me aback sometimes when they behave differently than I would anticipate...


Posted 11 Years Ago


a lot of wisdom in this little poem. and most of it is in the form of questions and not answers. the older i get, the more i believe that true wisdom is in knowing how little we know. so we breathe and wonder and breathe in wonder.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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