Bottom Line

Bottom Line

A Poem by Andrew - Moon Fixer
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Wondering

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The bottom line

 

 

 

Some times I don’t know where my head is.

 

I seem to be okay.

 

But, every now and then I really do wonder.

 

I know the whole procedure.

 

Are you okay?

 

Is this an everyday occurrence?

 

Do you talk to yourself?

 

How long has this been going on?

 

Blah blah blah…….

 

You have to understand.

 

I am not like everyone else.

 

I do not want to be like everyone else.

 

I am me.

 

Fin.


© 2010 Andrew - Moon Fixer



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It's not easy to cope with others' worries. That is finely shown here.
It is not easy to always wear the veil of happiness and well-being. That is also shown here.
Of most importance, it is never easy to tell people that there is nothing an have them believe you. This is not only shown, but also proven wrong here.

A finely written poem which conveys a simple message that is very clearly put forth and stands on its own two legs. My hat's off to you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Simple and to the point. I like this for sure.

Don't be anybody else unless you want to change yourself.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's not easy to cope with others' worries. That is finely shown here.
It is not easy to always wear the veil of happiness and well-being. That is also shown here.
Of most importance, it is never easy to tell people that there is nothing an have them believe you. This is not only shown, but also proven wrong here.

A finely written poem which conveys a simple message that is very clearly put forth and stands on its own two legs. My hat's off to you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha thats great. This is a good way to pronounce to people that they needn't see you as crazy or anything but just see you as you. This is a really good poem. Great write!

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Andrew - Moon Fixer
Andrew - Moon Fixer

Fontana, CA



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