My Island Rose

My Island Rose

A Poem by Andrew - Moon Fixer
"

This is for a friend of mine that I met here In writers cafe. I do not hear from her any more. But this is what I felt.

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My Island Rose

 

By

 

Andrew Lucero

 

 

 

 

You feel the warm breeze on your face.

 

As you close your eyes to the setting sun.

 

The wind plays in your long dark hair.

 

Your short dress flows as the sea before you.

 

The palm trees sway back in forth.

 

Waves crash, long the shore.

 

But none of this is on your mind.

 

I stand on the deck looking at you.

 

My heart racing as every moment passes.

 

People walk by and talk to each other.

 

I don’t see anyone else on the ship.

 

I just see a beauty on the shore looking at me.

 

I want to cry, but I hold it in.

 

I hold a flower you gave me before I left.

 

On that flower was a kiss you put on it.

 

I see you waving. Good by.


I will remember our last kiss.

 

Aloha, My Island girl.

 

 

 

Fin


© 2011 Andrew - Moon Fixer



Author's Note

Andrew - Moon Fixer
This may have grammar problems but this is written from the heart.

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Very touching piece to be about someone you met on the cafe. I bet she would be honored to know something so good was inspired by her. Great Write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very romantic and heart felt. Nicely done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job. This is a good, heartfelt piece of material. Nothing sucks like leaving the one you love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww. That is so sweet! I feel the love you have for this person and the love and passion you had when writing this. Very Passionate write, and a very good write! Excellent job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 4, 2010
Last Updated on May 24, 2011
Tags: Island, love, alone, missing someone

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Andrew - Moon Fixer
Andrew - Moon Fixer

Fontana, CA



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I am back to writing again. it's been many years since I was here. I know a lot of my old friends are gone. Good journey to them. I hope they find what they are looking for. I have seen many things an.. more..

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