Hatred

 

Evil and hatred is all I feel for you now.

I loved you I cared for you.

I let you in the most intimate parts of my life.

You act as if nothing happened.

You lied to your own friends.

You lied to me and my heart.

I can’t stand the way you look at my friends.

I can’t stand to look at you.

I can’t stand the way you look at me with disgust!

I want you to know that no matter what,

I will always despise you in a way you can not imagine!

I hope you hate me just as much.

Because now I will never forgive you for all you’ve done to me.

I will never trust anyone like you again.

You’ve taught me a valuable lesson.

You’ve taught me that you are heartless.

You don’t care about human females.

You are your father!

Author's Note

for my ex bf....a long time ago.

Reviews

[Fra/c/ture]

this poem has its highs and lows. some of the lines might be able to be condensed, since some of the ideas are very parallel. the i cant stand lines are nice right in a row and the best gutshot to me is the last line--you are your father.


thats a dagger, there.

if you play around any more with this, id make sure to keep that as a last line. its on point.

[Lexy]

"You are your father." It sounds like that you knew that he hated his father, and to show him how... IDK... mad @ him... or how wrong he was, you needed the perfect example. Good work!!!