I give up

I give up

A Poem by ~Angelic~

I give up on caring
I give up on trying
I give up on loving
I give up on giving 
I give up on being there

Why bother to be this way 
When everyone just takes
And not once ever gives
I'm tired of being there
Why bother of doing it
When I don't get the same in return 

It's useless
It's pointless
Everyone is selfish 
No one truly cares
I suffer in silence
I suffer in the dark 

New friends 
Aren't worth it
Old friends
Don't understand it
Who cares
No one else does
Why should I?

Why should I burden myself
Why should I bother?

So I just give up
And I will stay to myself
Keep everything bottled up inside
As I have done
For years
Without anyone there

© 2014 ~Angelic~


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I like it. I like the repetitive I (do something) reference. And I love the powerful ending.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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~Angelic~
~Angelic~

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Well, where to start. I have been given the nickname angel by many people. And because of that, it has stuck with me and I even got a tattoo of it. I do enjoy role playing. It helps bring out the .. more..

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