Aquarius

The delta

Aquarius

 

In this watery plane they meet

Fluid and natural

She sweet and wild

He salty and immense

Now merge into one

 

Kissed by the sun they meet

So different yet so equal

Under the watchful eyes of the stars

Their body intertwine

Twirling splashing in trembling waves

 

Their nature forgotten

They become one

She vanishes into him

He moves on carrying her essence

 

Torrents pull him back

For another beach he leaves

For another lover

For another body of sweet wildness

And the adventure of Aquarius begins again 

Author's Note

I wrote this while listening to this song really inpiring to me
http://youtu.be/7wg4BmWIjI8

Reviews

[Echoes of Eros]

In these waves and torrents there is such a beautiful transcendence. I am an Aquarius, so your title caught my eye so quickly, and your poetry transformed into a fierce rush of deep, pure water in me. xo

[Rose Black]

Thank Eros

[Chris Micha]

The water bearer as I am Aquarious. I found this so intriging and beautiful. I love how you marry the salt to water. A brilliant piece! :)

[Rose Black]

Thank you =D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very well written. Sounds like a playa of the ocean. Unique and creavtive.

[Rose Black]

Thank you =D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.

[Bluefire]

This is so beautiful, I love the title, it reminded me of another song called "Aquarius" by The 5th Demensions. =3
I also love Digital Daggers, their rockin'
Anywho, well done! ^^

[Rose Black]

Thanks Kat =D

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Awakened Rose]

"She vanishes into him
He moves on carrying her essence"
Beautiful. This poem was everything.

Thank you for sharing :)

[Rose Black]

Thank you Rose =D

[Mister_Sir]

Wow. Your words painted such a majestic image in my head. I loved the astronomical metaphors, and the description of the sex was so beautiful. Although, I think it would have been more accurate to say "He vanishes into her" instead of "She vanished into him." I love how as the poem progresses, the glorification of love and sex intensifies, yet it all disappears at the tragic end with the "Torrents pull[ing] him back." The tragedy just makes the poem even more amazing. This is truly quality writing. Never stop.

Neurotically yours,
Mister Splitbrain

[Rose Black]

Thank you for you're kind review =D

[Rj]

I am impressed, i rarely read poems but this one was really good! well done.

[Rose Black]

Thank you i'm flattered =D

[Rj]

:) really well done.. by the way i am an aquarius that's what attracted me to this poem.

[ron]

This is romantically tragic. She has but one lover while he has many. Great poem I love how it flows and brings you to its end, and yet it begins again. Amazing.

[Rose Black]

Glad you liked it Ron =D

[ron]

It was fantastic. I couldn't put the end on a poem like you did here I love it.

[Rose Black]

I'm really flattered thank you Ron

[ron]

You are most welcome, and thank you for sharing.

[Pax]

I have read it a couple of times, already, still it is amusing, how a life of an aquarius begins again and again, always finding new love, seems like his nature gives a curse to him, now i wonder, very intriguing piece my friend...

[Rose Black]

Thank you Pax

[Pax]

always a pleasure my friend...

[Bright Ocean Star]

This poem reminds me of another one by another poetess....I like it very much. Nice imagery, and personification. Very nice write, Rose Black...

[Rose Black]

Thanks Star