Stuck forever

Stuck forever

A Poem by Anjali

I'm like a knot, stuck on a rope, for forever.
I feel the confusion, running through my head.
I felt the sadness, that came over and stayed​ forever.

Everyone's perfect, with their Imperfections,
Whereas, I'm Imperfect, even with my perfections.

I'm like a soul, stuck between life and death, forever.
I feel the grief, running through my heart.
I felt that sorrowness, that came over, and stayed forever.

Everyone's capable, with their inabilities,
Whereas, I'm incapable, even with my abilities.

I'm like a refill, stuck inside a pen, for forever.
I feel the tension, running through my mind.
I felt that abandonment, that came over, and it stayed forever.

Everyone's complete, with their incompletion,
I'm incomplete, even with my completion.

I'm like a fossil, stuck inside the ground, for forever.
I feel the perfection, running through my face.
I felt the craziness, that came over and stayed forever.

Everyone's heartless, even with their hearts,
Whereas, my heart is full, even without a heart.

© 2017 Anjali



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the verse i relate to most is
the capable verse and inabilities very clever and the pen and the refill and the knot one great

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

3 Months Ago

Thank you..
wow you are only 16 and have such wisdom insight into yourself
i cannot believe the words you wrote they are so full of wisdom
i can relate to a few they are so great
i loved every word every line and love it just love it
good luck in my competition and in your future life thankyou

Posted 3 Months Ago


Anjali

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me...
This is beautiful. Keep up the great work.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Anjali

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
I really love how you worded this. It has a lot of potential. Keep up the god work.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

8 Months Ago

Thank you!
TheBrokenOnes166

8 Months Ago

Not a problem.
I feel like this could really help those people out there who are struggling to find self worth and such. Great job :D I think this is honestly my new favorite poem

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

11 Months Ago

Your words are really sweet and encouraging, thank you so much for taking your time.😊
the consistency of style and arrangement is ok.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Anjali

5 Months Ago

thanks for reading, i guess...
I lack words to express how well you have expressed your emotions by using such symbolism and apt metaphors.
I am imperfect even with my perfections.
I am incapable even with my abilities.
I am incomplete even with my completion.
I loved these oxymorons above all.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Anjali

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked the poem.😊
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome ☺

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Anjali
Anjali

Delhi, India



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