Its not what you want!

Sometimes i feel....

There i am...
Surrounding by different characters
Some faces are missing though
Its not what I want

Its neither a grief
Nor pain
Its just not what I really want

No regrets, no complaint against life
Whatever i have, i'm not satisfy though
Its not what I want

Having some many people around me
But not the ones i would like to have with me
Hence i'm in a state of solitude
Its not what I want!

~~sailing the ship

Author's Note

Kindly review

Reviews

[Payal Saxena]

It's actually human nature; what you get is actually you don't want. but otherwise. nice writing.

[Happy hours]

true that...thank you very much for the review...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Time often takes us to such places where we can't find any door.. like, there's no way out type of situation.. And here...it's clear from what you've written...
absolutely right...
and that's the truth.. we have to live there where time wants us to...
we are nothing infront of time...
: ) Anindita ( :

[Happy hours]

Yes...i'm agree..thanks for your kind review... :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

Life can be like this. Sometimes we go with the flow but that us not what we really want.
We feel the need of some people who aren't there.
Well written

[Happy hours]

thanks a lot dear friend for the review... :)

[Rosmine D'Silva]

We should be satisfied in life and accept whatever comes in our way. Life is a mixture of joys and sorrows..I liked the poem especially the line ' no regrets no complaints against life'

[Happy hours]

yes, That's right. Thanks a lot for your kind review... :)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

I like the theme that has been highlighted here. Usually one has quite a few people around him- but not the ones he wishes for. This happens quite often with me. Solitude is something which can afford you more elation then unwanted company. Keep writing.

[Happy hours]

Thanks vatsal for kind review and motivation... :)

[barleygirl]

I love the way you describe that tunnel we all end up walking thru at some point in life, where things aren't bad, they aren't good, but they're just dissatisfying. You've showed us this feeling well in your words. Many people walk thru this tunnel most of their lives, so I like seeing your ending, where the narrator realizes he/she must not settle for this boring vanilla life.

[Happy hours]

Thank you ma'am for kind review... m really glad u liked it.. :)