Blood Bath©

Murder

Silver so shiny it blinds your eyes,
Inside and out, muffling your cries.
A handle so black it makes darkness look grey,
I write these words, cause there’s nothing left to say.
White porcelain so new yet dusty but smooth,
Making your skin feel like it has something to prove.
Red is the stains that you leave behind,
This painful memory I won’t rewind.
But just like a man who no longer loves his wife,
I took a vow to put blood on this knife.

Reviews

[KUFU]

Nice! I'm feelin the rhyme scheme.
A short ode to, well, murder. Very dark...and psychologically disturbing. Well done.

[Danielle Duff]

Love it! Simple, dark, and deep.

Great work!