The Sun and Morning Star...

 

http://www.writerscafe.org/acryingsoul54

 

We are…

 Sprinkles of imagination

 

Twinkles of eyes that glow

 

Softness that only skin can sing

 

Those moments when our heart rings

Leaving that imprint upon every soul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If the desert was our place

 

Of love and life

 

I would cherish the heat

And wish

For it to be our passion

 

 

 

If we were the skies

 

And the Heavens

 

Gave us wings

 

Then my thoughts

Would be, with you

Among the clouds

 

 

To be the Night

 

AndYou the Moon

 

We could share life

For eons of time

 

 

If raindrops we were

 

Falling within the rain

Letting us join the seas

 

Expanding more than oceans

 

To be magic and share illusions

 

Magically creating whispers

So we could swirl like the wind

 

 

 

Together within thoughts

Crossing barriers of the mind

 

We would bind together

As one soul

 

 

If we suddenly became ink

 

Within a poets pen

We would share each other’s words

 

Becoming letters and lines

Maybe even rhythms’ and rhymes

 

 

Two poems enclosed

Inside the muse

We are...

 

The Sun and Morning Star

 

 

 By Art Sun  

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

a bond expressed in a beautiful sonnet. i like the way these two people's souls are intertwined. great romantic imagery.

[The Cobra Lounge]

what lovemaking should be...weightless and full of wonderful energy. Beautiful picture...there's zero gravity in your words...they feel as if they could float on forever.....

[Art]

humbled my friend...and yes I wish they would float on ...forever...

[manyantlers]

HaHo,
Pretty darn good! I really enjoy your words and how they seem to flow like music, music of the heart. Life and light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Lovely Lady]

So well done and the music is phenomenal !

[Tate Morgan]

this is my favorite part You know you are a very good man
If we suddenly became ink



Within a poets pen

We would share each other’s words



Becoming letters and lines

Maybe even rhythms’ and rhymes

[Robbie]

This is breathtaking...a surreal love beautifully depicted...
"Those moments when our heart rings
Leaving that imprint upon every soul"~ Excellent write!

[Lina Grey]

Beautiful! I really love how this flows from one analogy to the next, so smooth and fluid! Everything has its place and every passion has a home. This poem is so strong and romantic. It took my breath away when I read it. The imagery was so vivid the pictures almost weren't needed, but they were gorgeous and added nice flair. This is by far an excellent piece. Thank you.

[Susie Q]

Awesome! A beautiful story of LOVE. Thank you, Art. This was added on my DADS birthday and it sounded so much like the LOVE he shared with my MOM. I will add this to my library. God Bless!

[Valentine]

WOW..you not only got my attention with this one..you set my mind to old and long lost love..One of your best..Kathie

[Marie Harrison]

To be the Night
AndYou the Moon
We could share life
For eons of time
Beautiful!