Das Klavier (The Piano)

Gute Nacht, meine schöne Dame

heute ist einen guten Tag für Romanze

erzähle ich dir meinem Name
wenn du dich benihmst ganze.
lass' meine kalten Finger dich berühren
wir werden Schönheit zusammen schaffen

beruhig' du dich, lass' mich nur dich führen
lass' unsere Herzen zusammen klaffen.

 

Schnell verschwindet die Musik

als mein Körper fällt auf dir

meine Krankheit hat mich besiegt

wir bleiben einfach einsam, hier.

 

 

-Translation-

 

Good night, my fair lady

today is a good day for romance

I'll tell you my name

when you fully behave yourself

let my cold fingers touch you

we will create beauty together

calm down, just let me guide you

let our hearts open together.

 

Swiftly the music vanishes

as my body falls on you

my illness has defeated me

we simply stay lonely, here.

Author's Note

Ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[DeadToTheWorld]

Hmm...I liked this one as well I'm a music freak so what can I say I thought it was great I can't read German so I'm thankful you put a translation in it. I thought about my own Klavier it's behind me. This piece of writing was just a beautiful piece in my mind. Absolutely amazing piece of writing great job.

~ TheMadGothicHatter ~

[LittleMadGirl]

The german one has a few grammar mistakes but it's not that bad ...

well the english one is greater and you get the real meaning ... A nice way to talk to an instrument, indeed ... and a lot of emotions are hiding withing these words you're using
Actually there's much melancholy but I guess that's only my way of interpreting it =)

nice one!