Dump was I

There are times that we almost forgot to think for our self and ended up for nothing after giving up everything.

Dump was I.
        For letting the time die.
                       From three till' dusk.
                                 Even knows for an empty cask.

Author's Note

Just few lines I got here and hope you will get my point.

Reviews

[613]

I really liked this one. It's one of the most unique poems I've seen on here. Nice job.

- Brittney

[Ashadan]

Thanks for the appreciation Brit. ^_^ Glad to hear that

[613]

Sure thing!

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Sometimes time passes us by and things don't get accomplished,
which irritates us, we have to be aware of time and use it wisely:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ashadan]

Thanks for reviewing my friend =)

[Joshua Clement]

Ah, but was it a waste because it was unproductive, or though unproductive, you wanted to do it anyway? Good poem! Thanks for posting!

[Ashadan]

Thank you for the compliment =)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well...i think the meaning is some deep feeling of regret. You didn't do something in the right time, or you were just late with it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well...i think the meaning is some deep feeling of regret. You didn't do something in the right time, or you were just late with it.

[Ashadan]

Thank you for stopping by =)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome.

[Peggy-Lou]

Shot of inspiration, enlightening

[Ashadan]

Thanks for the review and for stopping by. =)