Shades of a girl

Shades of a girl

A Poem by Ashwin Thakur
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Beauty isnt what you see its just what u feel

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When you were a child happy and wild
How much clothes did you piled
Your work always unfiled
Then who was there
For you to love and care
A lady cute and sweet
Yes she was your mom
Surely a godly form
Whenever you were sad
She thrived to make you glad
Think when you were in her womb
She must have felt like a tomb
But there was always a smile
On her face no sadness traced
When you grow up more
A girl will always come before
To show that she cares for you more
Then she becomes a friend
Roses like her she would always send
Then she becomes your wife
A part of your life
Queen of your messy hive
Then comes a little angel
Yes thats a girl
A beautiful pearl
With beautiful hair that curls
She is always there
Also to take your care
How is it funny
These people who makes our life sunny
Why they have to be a girl like honey
Who are always sweet
Careless and quite
Always ready for a fight
Of course for you
Why they have to sacrifice
For people like you evil and vice
Mom,a wife,a daughter your life
Of course they are queen of you hive
So guys now when you see a girl
Be nice because they are like pearl
And thats how u understand a girl.

© 2015 Ashwin Thakur



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Very nicely written! A beautiful way of complimenting women i must say...:-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you esha for reading it........ :)
This is so unique. The ending was the best. So many men take advantage of woman or forget how prescious they are. I'm glad there are some out there who realize this. Beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it...
You've underlined the importance of women in men's lives very effectively. A very sweet writeup with the message pronounced boldly and clearly. Thumbs up! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Because WOMEN are important in this universe
Thank for reading it bushra.....
very sweet, I enjoyed this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you kimberley:):)
This was cute although I'm not huge on the whole rhyming thing, as it can get a bit cheesy. But nonetheless, good stuff.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you gabby.....
A sweet poem which underlines the importance of girls in our life. Be they your mother, sister, wife, daughter, they always take care of you and love you from the bottom of their hearts, today, tommorow always. Lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you paari its nice to see a girls complement for this poem:):):)
paari

2 Years Ago

Hey btw, I am not a girl... My nickname is paari. I am Prashant otherwise.
Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Oh sorry i thougt it is pari a fairy
I agree. Great wisdom in the words.
"Mom,a wife,a daughter your life
Of course they are queen of you hive
So guys now when you see a girl
Be nice because they are like pearl
And thats how u understand a girl."
Women raise-us up and show us how to live. We must love and respect them. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you for sparing your time and reading all my poems:)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Such a sweet poem, loved the line "A beautiful pearl"!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you rasha
amazing..........
sincere honest dedication.........
very well written........
beautifully rhymed......
Females in all forms are very fascinating.......
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your great compliment pushkar
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

you are welcome..............!!! :) :)
Awww...this was so beautiful..
How nicely you described the roles a girl plays in her life..
If everyone starts to think like you...What a revolutionary change would happen!
A salute for such a thinking..
Thank you for respecting girls...and thank you for sharing this wonderfully written piece!

-Anahat :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you anahat for words of appreciation

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Added on April 24, 2015
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Ashwin Thakur
Ashwin Thakur

Mumbai, India



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