Dont you dare

Dont you dare

A Poem by Ashwin Thakur
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I exist

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Dont you dare
Dont you care
Wont you care
Wont you dare
Its up to you
Make a choice
Open up your voice
Make some noise
Happy or sad your choice
Failures are there
I have my share
The god doesnt care
He is there to laugh
He have enough staff
Still cant catch me
Because he also know
I am not here to bow.

© 2015 Ashwin Thakur



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a strong poem about oneself and the importance of choices. people must have an attitude that they are the center of their universe. They must know that they exist and make everyone feel that too. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Great write but the line "The god doesnt care
He is there to laugh
He have enough staff
Still cant catch me
Because he also know
I am not here to bow."
Kinda disappoint me! God is there to help U, if U firmly believe!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Destiny Dreamer

2 Years Ago

Plz don't get offended by my words! I really didn't mean to hurt your feelings, what you wrote was b.. read more
Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

See what you said now
Your god
Its mine its yours its everybodys
Destiny Dreamer

2 Years Ago

Yeah but we are from two different religions, I know there is only one GOD! But as far as I know, yo.. read more
hmmmm.........quite a challenge.......
powerful and passionate......
beautiful and thoughtful write!!!
:)
p.s. a few minor grammatical errors.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Ha ha uspar dhyan doonga bhai
Pushkar Prabhat

2 Years Ago

jarur......koi baat nhi!!! hota hai!!! :D :) :)

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Ashwin Thakur
Ashwin Thakur

Mumbai, India



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