When I Come Undone

When I Come Undone

A Poem by ♥Ashley Nicole Cameron♥

When I Come Undone.


A gasp of breath,

A stream of tears.

I try so hard to get you,

To understand my fears.


A monster inside,

He makes me breath doubt.

I cut him a path,

But he just won’t come out.


A broken heart,

Jagged pieces in hand.

I will bleed for you,

If it will make you understand.


I don’t want this hurt,

I don’t want this pain.

Still here it lives,

And who is to blame?


A bit of trash,

Is what I have become.

This monster will only concede,

When I have come undone.


©12-5- 2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

© 2015 ♥Ashley Nicole Cameron♥

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Nicely displayed the emotiond of loyality and trust

Posted 2 Years Ago

This might be my favorite piece from you. I love the imagery and just the thought of having what we perceive as a monster in us that we just can't get rid of. I can definitely relate my friend :) The only thing I did notice was breath should be breathe :) Glad to read your work Nikki :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on December 5, 2015
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♥Ashley Nicole Cameron♥
♥Ashley Nicole Cameron♥

Pulaski, IN

Hi there! I'm Ashley! My close friends call me Nikki. ♥ A full time student at UoP (University of Phoenix). A member of NSCS (National Society of Collegiate Scholars). I'm married to the m.. more..