The Sweetest Kiss..

The sweet kiss of autumn’s breeze

Solace found within every stroke

Every tree branch touched by her hand

For she is Nature’s Allure

By Twilight, her eyes embellish the sky

A Flaw I️ Find Not In Her

The Sweet Kiss of autumn’s breeze

Solace found within every stroke

Of her paintbrush.

Her voice dances whimsically 

As a pianist caresses her keys

A Sentimental Mood

The sweet kiss of autumn’s breeze

Solace found with every stroke

Falling deeper into her canvas

Of Subtle Intimacy;

The gentle embrace

Infused with Fiery Ardor 

Reviews

[Delmar Cooper]

The Fall is my favorite season. I even forgive it for its dire prediction of the yet to come winter. I enjoyed the last two lines and agree with the fiery ardor idea. Fall is that last big bash before it all goes to rack and ruin, that great Mardi Gras parade before we give it all up and fast in the cold.

[R.E. Ray]

A vivid painting in poetic strokes. You draw the reader/observer into this scene. We feel the breeze and see autumn’s artwork. Masterful piece. Thanks for sharing.

[HennyTheJetSmith]

thank you sir, that means a lot. to see & feel what one does through prose is always key, especially if the reader wasn't present at the time. thank you