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Discordant

Discordant

A Poem by Aura Devour
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These lines just came to me out of nowhere while I was giving my Psychology exam today. Please correct me if there are mistakes. Thank you!

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How do you smile, when you're broken inside?
Running from the pain that engulfs you
You drown your senses in numbness
(You) Want to shut the door and walk away.
All the strength you ever had
Have reached its limit in the end.
Left with a void in your soul,
You fight to let go,
While I fight to hold on!
Only to realise that...
We're running in circles
Coming together just to fall apart again!

© 2015 Aura Devour


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You're such a genius Aura, like someone already said, the last line took my heart away

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful.
I love the poem and love the last line most of all.
"Coming together just to fall apart again!". Wonderful poem, dear poet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aura Devour

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. Means a lot! :)
Misery

9 Years Ago

Truly welcome.

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Aura Devour
Aura Devour

Guwahati, Rukminigaon, India



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I love music, especially metal. Enjoy anything weird, creepy and macabre. Big fan of Rumi. Love meeting new people, love talking about things that actually matter. Still learning, still experiencing. .. more..

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