You

It's you.
Everywhere.

In my mind
In those narrow corners of love
And in the morning sunshine.

Under the starlit gaze
And those memories of love we made
Under the warm blanket.

In my vivid dreams
And in the showering rain
In the whispers of the wind.

In the cold winter mist
And those lonely nights I spent
In the alley of our kiss.

In my skin
And every inch of my being
On my lips and in my longing.

In the early hours of the day
Driving me insane
Desperately trying to wane the madness.

But it's you
Still everywhere.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost desperate emotion comes through in this very moving piece...i am inclined to wish that i had written "in the alley of our kiss"----great line.

this could be of a love who has passed...or just a love who consumes our every moment of thought...

really nicely done...

j.

[Aura Devour]

Thanks a lot. :)

[Antoñyo]

This piece can be directed at some1 or love itself....Either way, it's captured PERFECTLY!
In my personal stash it goes. Thanks for the (100/100) share.

[Aura Devour]

Thanks a lot.

[Greg Agee]

I really love the way you described this heartache. Your emotions flowed. Bridging was great. That's why your a contest finalist. Keep writing, Im a fan

[Aura Devour]

Thank you so much. :)

[Frank]

Haunting and sad. Easy reading. Loved it.

[samparks,sam]

That reality of life. good writing

[Sami Khalil]

His love and memory is present everywhere in your life. A very romantic piece...:)...............