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A Meaningful Veil (Tri-meter Version 2)

A Meaningful Veil (Tri-meter Version 2)

A Poem by B-poet

Concealed imperfections

Masked by beauty's keen

Sense of affection had

Helped to prepare a groom's

Leap of faith into the

Arms of his new loving

Wife named Emanuelle

Had eyes depicting how

Her love would prevail once

She chose a pure portrayal

For her essence as a

Divine princess bride now

Mirrored from the likes of

A raised Meaningful Veil


© 2018 B-poet



Author's Note

B-poet
Made a slight revision at the end. It adds a little more zeal to this poem. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

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Enchanting, I could be completely wrong with what you tried to portray here but I felt I was being swept back in time, to an older honorable time of pure love and chivalry. I think it was the "divine princess bride" part at the end. Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

B-poet

11 Months Ago

Thanks Emberlorna, much appreciated. :)



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As usual your talent amazes me. Perfection in every line :) Julie

Posted 5 Months Ago


*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

A very strong feeling on the end, you are right, it adds a layer.... The strong surge of up-down sense as I read... A somewhat unique rhyme format, a pure portrayal of mirrored imperfection...

Posted 9 Months Ago


Enchanting, I could be completely wrong with what you tried to portray here but I felt I was being swept back in time, to an older honorable time of pure love and chivalry. I think it was the "divine princess bride" part at the end. Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

B-poet

11 Months Ago

Thanks Emberlorna, much appreciated. :)

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Added on August 26, 2017
Last Updated on March 3, 2018

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