Hope You Forgive Me

I try not to look at your smile

'Cause I can't bare seeing you happy

I let you walk away from me

'Cause I can't look into your eyes

Looking back at all the things you've done for me

And the things I've said, all the lies

I couldn't stay, so I tried to hide

I don't deserve you at all

If you want to leave

I wouldn't blame you at all

Lies after lies

I couldn't look into your eyes

I didn't want you to see

The truth in me

I wanted us to be how we once were

So I tried to keep it all together

I thought of telling you about the real me

And each time I tried, I failed

So I changed my mind, I stopped trying

'Cause some things are better unspoken

Instead of giving excuses

I'd rather just walk away

Please don't ask me why

But yes, I'm leaving you

Begging for forgiveness 

Just seems too wrong

I've caused a lot of bad things to Us

So, I wouldn't expect you to forgive me

......Yet, I hope you do......

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This speaks measures... the entire read echoes with each word... the truth is the truth and hurts at times... you really let this one convey your inner thoughts... and end the verse with the line:

......Yet, I hope you do......

[Karina]

Awww that's so touching.. nice work!

[WriteMyLoveOut]

Ah damn, so sad... and beautiful. Good job. :j

[Raven Starhawk]

I can relate to this. We all have done things that we want to put behind us and hope to never discover ever again.

[Mackenzie Brooke]

Very nicely done, your real human emotions come through wonderfully great job :)

[Keith]

This is a sad tale of lost love. A lament of choices made and their destructive effects. I could feel the heavy heart you put into this. Well done.