Haven

Haven

A Poem by Dezaraye
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Inspired by a wonderful friend's soft words ... Emily, you're amazing!

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I watch with wond'ring, twinkling eyes,

The drifting of the butterflies.

Their wings so soft with golden light,

Take hold my heart as it takes flight.


Resplendent rays of sunshine beam

In splendor through the sky they gleam

Bewitching hour, night to day,

This moment where I long to stay.


If I am dreaming, please don't wake,

I pray not "for my soul to take."

Encircled by your loving arms,

I lay in peace and safe from harm.


A woven net of safety here,

A place so free of every fear.

A magic moment, cloaked in love,

Ascending to the stars above


I watch with wond'ring, twinkling eyes,

The drifting of the butterflies.

Their wings so soft with golden light,

Take hold my heart as it takes flight.


© 2011 Dezaraye



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Dezaraye
Hmmm. Not sure 'bout this one. It has it's moments ...

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I found it decadent of elegance and grace!

Posted 5 Years Ago


What a wonderfully enchanting poem that flows effortlessly as I am drawn by the charm of your words felt from the depths of the heart. I love butterfly's, and I so enjoy the way you have used them as a metaphor.
"I watch with wond'ring, twinkling eyes,
The drifting of the butterflies.'
Just one of the the many expressions that I adored.
I refreshing read my dear friend. Thank you for sharing ~ :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This piece has many wonderful moments in it! Flows beautifully and has lovely descriptions. I liked that you repeated the first stanza again at the end :)
Great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


It has wonderful moments with magical wording. I feel like this in my cocoon/bed every night, safe...protected and loved.
Take hold my heart as it takes flight...yes sublime poetry and beautiful rhyme that resonates.
You did real well Chookie xxxx

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow! I love this! :D It was filled with so much positive energy and love. That's so nice to be able to read and let it simply be absorbed into the soul. A fantastic poem!

MG

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's perfectly lovely, just like you are. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Each moment is a beauty. Very loving and so much how we would like things to be.
Peaceful and claming this is .. and this is a beautiful verse.

"Resplendent rays of sunshine beam

In splendor through the sky they gleam

Bewitching hour, night to day,

This moment where I long to stay."

Very lovely, Dezaraye. Also wonderful inspiration from Emily.

Chloe


Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh, this is so filled with a tenderness and beauty that puts the soul at ease. The flow of your words, rhyme and rhythm, sing like a summer song line by line. Loved this!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really like the feeling of this poem, so safe and calm and beautiful. And the rhyming is great. Wonderful job! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


The flow of this is outstanding...this was eloquent and beautiful...soft and inspiring...a gorgeous piece of writing...

Posted 6 Years Ago



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