The brand of beauty you possess

How the hues of love fell upon me

like the reflection of the blue moon

like the flare of a star blazed sky

in the solitude of valor night.

How your abysmal eyes drives

The divinity in me, an eternal gift

I portrait your lambent eyes

Like the light of the universe.

Your smile , like an untasted privilege

which brands me with a new hope to live

Your pearly face, some marveled heritage

corked in the pastoral shadow of your hairs.

 

I want to hear your alluring voice

I want to fill my soul with your words

Bury myself inside your poise

feel the depth of your truth.

As completely as one can

And find your heart of gold 

and the richness of the soul you possess

the beauty of the little things you do.

 

To have you here in the castles 

that I crafted for you in my youth

And to breeze in your dreams

like an obvious touch of sleep.

To find the Euphoric ecstasy

The kind of endless life and joy

Only you could blend me with, 

the Eden of the refinement of my soul.

Reviews

[Manpreet]

Beautiful!!!

[Rebecca James age 10]

really cool poem :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I can just imagine you out there in the picture, vigourously, reciting this fine whimiscal verse, well done

[gombeggar]

thiswould make a very good public read, spoken i think it would emote more

[Deron Alexis]

wow devotion love passion really well captured good comparisons the blue moon ,eden of refinement very creative very well organised and well expressed good job

[InsanityWriter]

Beautifully put! Fantastic job. ;)

[Dayran]

It reads like an early winter thaw that rages down the river. It springs from a source that's a great zest for life. Whether we dream it, live it, inspire or break into song, it all comes from the one self of all. It shares itself with us and from us to all. Breathtaking Bal.

[Inda]

It feels like a parent talking about their child, that kind of love. Great piece!

[rnuff]

such an amazing write, really like this, beuatiful.

[David Scott]

You might be able to actually sell this brand... ;-)
Well chosen words.
My favorite line was, "Your smile, like an untasted privilege"
Very nice thought.