Let Love Flourish

Its my second piece about love after 'Let love die'.

'There is nothing like angels'
thats what I believed
colliding you was a bliss
thats when angels' existence got revealed


Your smile is like raindrops
that clears the dirt
 from the leaves of my heart
Without you,my life is dry like a desert


 Your words are so meaningful
you put colours in my life,that was tragic
you are healing my sick soul
with your moon magic


And your eyes are as deep as ocean
I wonder whats in there at its core
I just want to stare in your eyes forever
Cause your eyes are what i want to explore


 Your laughter is like ripples of energy
caresses & moves right through me
Your giggle is so calming
its like sweet songs of honeybee


And every word you say
kills all my worries,i feel free
You speak,you talk like a fay
your words are priceless to me


Your innocence is like moonlight
that echoes sweet sounds of wonder
soft,sweet and bright
I can't help my heart to surrender


Your presence,like a sweet summer breeze
fills me with joy
I grow,I glow like trees
Every moment with you,I enjoy


You are the masterpiece of the universe
attractive like a glue
You are soothing like a moonbeam
And I love you.

Reviews

[Emma Joy]

Your words remind me of old writings from way back in the past .. gentle, flowing, with subtle richness, ' .. You are the masterpiece of the universe
attractive like a glue ~ You are soothing like a moonbeam ~ And I love you. '

Your title seems more than appropriate, tis fine, and reading more English can help to avoid errors another time.

[Rhea]

sweet

[Cathy Wattam]

Nice poem. The title is fine as it is. Some grammatical errors but otherwise a good piece of work.

[Marie]

Quaint, kooky, sweet, charming--a rare display of words. Facets of Love? Faces of Love? Flourishing Love? You've chosen a most apt title.

[Simbake777]

"Let Love Flow" is a fitting title, for this beautifully-orchestrated poem!

Definitely a favourite! Keep up the good work!! :)

[MOON]

Captivating prose , nice flow, like the lines.. Your smile is like raindrops
that clears the dirt
from the leaves of my heart